Kia ora Sakina. Thanks for sharing your creative writing on your blog. You have come up with some great wow words that enable the reader to visually imagine the scene. Kapai! Don't forget to add in your drawing our a volcanic eruption.
Mālō e lelei Sakina, some great sentences...lightning flashing like a snakes forked tongue!! Check out the writing you have done on the first slide, what colour do you think is easier to read? Remember to check the colour of the writing on the background so the reader can see it clearly. I love the photo of the erupting volcano!
Kia ora Sakina. Thanks for sharing your creative writing on your blog. You have come up with some great wow words that enable the reader to visually imagine the scene. Kapai! Don't forget to add in your drawing our a volcanic eruption.
ReplyDeleteMālō e lelei Sakina, some great sentences...lightning flashing like a snakes forked tongue!!
ReplyDeleteCheck out the writing you have done on the first slide, what colour do you think is easier to read? Remember to check the colour of the writing on the background so the reader can see it clearly. I love the photo of the erupting volcano!