Thursday 11 March 2021

When I'm...... Poem

 Hi guys Sakina here. This is my poem I really like it and i  dought  that some of this is gonna come true and whenever you are gonna to do this remember to add more details Here it is


I hope you enjoy it. What are you going to be when you grow up? Blog ya later Sakina

5 comments:

  1. Ka pai Sakina. Wow, you've got some great goals for your future! Keep an eye out for the Ako Hiko Poetry Slam this term. I think you'd do a great job at it!

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    1. Hi Phil, Sakina here. Thank you and I will keep and eye out on it and I hope I will do a great job. Are you gonna do it? Blog ya later, Sakina.

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    2. I will be creating and sharing the poetry slam. I might write a poem to share as part of the introduction. Do you think that might hook people in?

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  2. Hi Teddy here. This is a good poem of what doing when your older.
    I have never made a poem like this before. Maybe next time you could make you title a bit more catchy?
    Was it fun making it?
    Blog you later

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    1. Hi Teddy, Sakina here. I will definitely make my title a bit more catchy an yes It was fun making it. Some of it might not actually become true but hopefully it does. How are you gonna be as a teenager? Blog ya later, Sakina.

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